Chapter 04, which started as Chapter 03 from the old revision, is another long chunk with too much happening. It should be broken into at least two parts. However, these large chucks are a reasonable size for grammar editing only. When the text was imported into my grammar checker, it received a score of "88," and when it was done, the score was "99." Admittedly, there were a LOT of missing commas. The screenshot below shows the result after the editing, there were approximately nine-thousand words in the edited portion.
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Document report for Chapter 04
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2018-08-04
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