Editing in the fifth chapter went well. The story had a lot going on, and the action was clarified with some better showing. So much of the telling was removed that it felt like a better story, even in this early phase. Sometimes, entire paragraphs were gutted to replace them with less information, but more vivid words.
Chapters 04 and 05 were added to the Github repo, and an .rtf file was added since there are interrobangs (‽) in the punctuation. Grammarly doesn't recognize interrobangs as punctuation.
Charged: Ides on GitHub.
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2018-08-21
Chapters 04 and 05 were added to the Github repo, and an .rtf file was added since there are interrobangs (‽) in the punctuation. Grammarly doesn't recognize interrobangs as punctuation.
Chapter 05 report
Charged: Ides on GitHub.
The rest of the posts for this project have been arranged by date.
First time here?
Completed projects from year 1
Completed projects from year 2
Completed projects from year 3
Completed projects from year 4
Completed projects from year 5
Disclaimer for http://24hourengineer.blogspot.com and 24HourEngineer.com
This disclaimer must be intact and whole. This disclaimer must be included if a project is distributed.
All information in this blog, or linked by this blog, is not to be taken as advice or solicitation. Anyone attempting to replicate, in whole or in part, is responsible for the outcome and procedure. Any loss of functionality, money, property or similar, is the responsibility of those involved in the replication.
All digital communication regarding the email address 24hourengineer@gmail.com becomes the intellectual property of Brian McEvoy. Any information contained within these messages may be distributed or retained at the discretion of Brian McEvoy. Any email sent to this address, or any email account owned by Brian McEvoy, cannot be used to claim property or assets.
Comments to the blog may be utilized or erased at the discretion of the owner. No one posting may claim property or assets based on their post.
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2018-08-21
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