A fresh set of eyes on my dialogue helped because some of the things I thought were obvious, or would have conveyed through emphatic reading, were not clear. Together, we improved this.
Clear meanings
I never looked into the effects of absolute silence on space travelers, but I assumed it would be troubling because quiet to me is unnerving. My editor was unsure, but she found that NASA had the same concern, and they conducted a study to test the effects.
We made a list of sound loops included with the houseboat
Marigold picks up an unexpected burst of data transmission. Ness and the cat suspect someone was spying on their ship. Now the audience can wonder why they are worth bugging.
Suspicions abound
In a lone night of editing, I wrote descriptions for more than forty panels. All of them were for edited dialogue, so my editor and I can cruise back through them when we have time.
Ever more descriptions
I caught up with descriptions, so now everything has a little something to paint a picture. In some cases, it was little more than talking about where someone was sitting, but I tried to include how people, or a robot cat, would look.
Bonus kitty picture
After a too-long break, I got it together and wrote a Hackaday article. I found a pretty useless machine, which is to say that it was a useless machine that was also attractive. It had a few more figurative bells and whistles that set it apart.
The rest of the summary posts have been arranged by date.
First time here?
Completed projects from year 1
Completed projects from year 2
Completed projects from year 3
Completed projects from year 4
Completed projects from year 5
Completed projects from year 6
Completed projects from year 7
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I never looked into the effects of absolute silence on space travelers, but I assumed it would be troubling because quiet to me is unnerving. My editor was unsure, but she found that NASA had the same concern, and they conducted a study to test the effects.
Marigold picks up an unexpected burst of data transmission. Ness and the cat suspect someone was spying on their ship. Now the audience can wonder why they are worth bugging.
In a lone night of editing, I wrote descriptions for more than forty panels. All of them were for edited dialogue, so my editor and I can cruise back through them when we have time.
I caught up with descriptions, so now everything has a little something to paint a picture. In some cases, it was little more than talking about where someone was sitting, but I tried to include how people, or a robot cat, would look.
After a too-long break, I got it together and wrote a Hackaday article. I found a pretty useless machine, which is to say that it was a useless machine that was also attractive. It had a few more figurative bells and whistles that set it apart.
The rest of the summary posts have been arranged by date.
First time here?
Completed projects from year 1
Completed projects from year 2
Completed projects from year 3
Completed projects from year 4
Completed projects from year 5
Completed projects from year 6
Completed projects from year 7
Disclaimer for http://24hourengineer.blogspot.com and 24HourEngineer.com
This disclaimer must be intact and whole. This disclaimer must be included if a project is distributed.
All information on this blog, or linked by this blog, is not to be taken as advice or solicitation. Anyone attempting to replicate, in whole or in part, is responsible for the outcome and procedure. Any loss of functionality, money, property, or similar, is the responsibility of those involved in the replication.
All digital communication regarding the email address 24hourengineer@gmail.com becomes the intellectual property of Brian McEvoy. Any information contained within these messages may be distributed or retained at the discretion of Brian McEvoy. Any email sent to this address, or any email account owned by Brian McEvoy, cannot be used to claim property or assets.
Comments to the blog may be utilized or erased at the discretion of the owner. No one posting may claim property or assets based on their post.
This blog, including pictures and text, is copyright to Brian McEvoy.
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