I switched gears to work on Gravy Shock while I traveled to see family during the holidays. I should finish the skate project soon, but it travels less neatly than a laptop with a script.
Editing the first chapter
I wanted to work my edits into the voice play, so I evaluated each line of dialogue to see if the comic version, voice edition, or a third edit was superior.
Developing a rhythm
The voice play could have been better, but I was proud. After a couple of sensitivity readings, the best course is to re-record it. I can change many small details too.
Editing more easily
I spent my time creating a super short story about Jerry's family. They can be a bit morbid, and Jerry says they have family fairy tales that all tend to be bleak. I wrote an anecdote about overcoming Death in five sentences.
Micro story
I hit the point where we cut the script to fit in a comic issue. I may move this in the voice play or keep it closer to the original. It may be necessary to cut some material from the comic, but the voice play can be any length.
Material not in the first comic
I aligned the script and comic so that when I write new material, it can't derail the other. I matched the ending to the first book/act and saved the delayed material for revising and inclusion later.
Converted to voice play
The rest of the summary posts have been arranged by date.
First time here?
Completed projects from year 1
Completed projects from year 2
Completed projects from year 3
Completed projects from year 4
Completed projects from year 5
Completed projects from year 6
Completed projects from year 7
Completed projects from year 8
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I wanted to work my edits into the voice play, so I evaluated each line of dialogue to see if the comic version, voice edition, or a third edit was superior.
The voice play could have been better, but I was proud. After a couple of sensitivity readings, the best course is to re-record it. I can change many small details too.
I spent my time creating a super short story about Jerry's family. They can be a bit morbid, and Jerry says they have family fairy tales that all tend to be bleak. I wrote an anecdote about overcoming Death in five sentences.
I hit the point where we cut the script to fit in a comic issue. I may move this in the voice play or keep it closer to the original. It may be necessary to cut some material from the comic, but the voice play can be any length.
I aligned the script and comic so that when I write new material, it can't derail the other. I matched the ending to the first book/act and saved the delayed material for revising and inclusion later.
The rest of the summary posts have been arranged by date.
First time here?
Completed projects from year 1
Completed projects from year 2
Completed projects from year 3
Completed projects from year 4
Completed projects from year 5
Completed projects from year 6
Completed projects from year 7
Completed projects from year 8
Disclaimer for http://24hourengineer.blogspot.com and 24HourEngineer.com
This disclaimer must be intact and whole. This disclaimer must be included if a project is distributed.
All information on this blog, or linked by this blog, is not to be taken as advice or solicitation. Anyone attempting to replicate, in whole or in part, is responsible for the outcome and procedure. Any loss of functionality, money, property, or similar, is the responsibility of those involved in the replication.
All digital communication regarding the email address 24hourengineer@gmail.com becomes the intellectual property of Brian McEvoy. Any information contained within these messages may be distributed or retained at the discretion of Brian McEvoy. Any email sent to this address, or any email account owned by Brian McEvoy, cannot be used to claim property or assets.
Comments to the blog may be utilized or erased at the discretion of the owner. No one posting may claim property or assets based on their post.
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